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Re: what do you listen to while writing?
The Roots and people who perform with them A Tribe Called Quest De La Soul OutKast MF Doom or one of his affiliates RATM That's pretty much it. I'm outta ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Paedogenesis (aka: What your parents really think of you)
hahahahahaha!! *wipes tears from eyes* I loved this! Really great job! My favorite part: If somebody killed Thor’s uncle, I guarantee you he wouldn’t embark on some “emotional journey of ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Things Science Can't Explain
This one wasn't on but I think it should be included simply because we know so little about it. Dark Matter All objects attract other objects. The more mass an ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Caught
Glad to help. Another thing I'd suggest if you want to create authentic sounding dialogue (and this is gonna sound kind of creepy) go to a public place and just ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Caught
Hello, skl02134. I'll be your reviewer/criticizer or whatever today. You can call me the Bad Narrator (even though my screename says otherwise) I'm ignoring the plot of the story itself ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Paedogenesis (aka: What your parents really think of you)
Paedogenesis No, it’s not some weird disorder that you have to register with the local police department for. Paedogenesis is basically, the young giving rise to the young. It happens ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Things Science Can't Explain
If the content is copied from other sites, please provide a link to those sites. Otherwise, YWS could get in trouble. Thanks. I did post a link. I don't have ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: He beats me
Good evening. I think Karsten nailed most of the issues with the story itself, so I'm gonna toss out some suggestions I think can help you strengthen the prose in ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Things Science Can't Explain
If the content is copied from other sites, please provide a link to those sites. Otherwise, YWS could get in trouble. Thanks. I did post a link. I don't have ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Anything Really: The Sequel? No! The Prologue!
He looked at the sea, his eyes lifeless, and thought about his story. His story... it was too painful to tell. But he would tell it. He gulped in the ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Things Science Can't Explain
The WOW! Signal Jerry Ehman was wowed when, on August 15th 1977, he received a radio signal from space that bore expected hallmarks of potential non-terrestrial and non-solar system origin. ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Things Science Can't Explain
Posted in Entertainment because I thought it was entertaining as well as informational. Enjoy and feel free to add more The Voynich manuscript is an ancient book that has thwarted ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: The Ward part 2
Part 1: The lighting in the hallway was even dimmer than the gym had been when Josh first entered it. The concrete floor was painted dark gray and the walls ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: The Ward (Part 1)
"Chemical Calisthenics"-Blackalicious: "Tire Me"-RATM: "Voodoo Child"-The Jimi Hendrix Experience: "Down Rodeo"-RATM:
Feb 10, 2010 -
Re: The Ward (Part 1)
It’s like being back in the womb except for the temperature, its bitter cold. He can’t tell if his eyes are open or closed because he can only see the ...
Feb 10, 2010
